All in Revision
Slang can slay—or sink your story faster than a Myspace profile. Using colloquialisms in your WIP can be risky business. Drop in a tired, outdated phrase, and you risk losing credibility with readers. Just chill is out. Next level and That’s what she said? Way out. Even amazeballs—how did that even enter the lexicon?
A summary of author Laura van den Berg's invaluable advice on novel revision, and reflections on how I am applying it as I work my way through the "murky middle."